Thursday, May 20, 2010

Post of the Week - Week 4 Term 2

Kia ora koutou - Hi everyone. I had an easy choice this week. Raven wins post of the week due to his effective paragraph writing. The students chose to learn about the legend of Mt Taranaki (you might have heard we are studying Volcanoes this term). Students were asked to retell the legend in their own words. Our big writing focus this term is writing effective paragraphs and we are slowly moving into writing full pieces of writing. This is a very good example. Students are now turning their pieces of writing into various kinds of digital learning objects - so, watch this space as their DLO's are due in next Wednesday. Oh, and by the way, Raven also had the privilege of sharing his writing with Mr Burt (our wonderful Principal). I am very proud of your efforts Raven. Keep up the great writing. To all you fans out there, don't forget to leave a comment on Ravens' blog.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Raven,
    I loved reading your post,that sounds wonderful.Thankyou for sharing , I wonder what you
    will be learning about next term?
    from Sela Rm10

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